English 1301
Angelina College
YOU and some old guy
Week of 2 – 6 October 2017
1. Monday and Tuesday:
A. Test
B. I will be pleased to take a
last look at your rough drafts.
C. Please don’t bring me your
draft if you have changed nothing about it
since I read it last week.
2. Wednesday and Thursday:
A. The final draft of your
descriptive essay is due at roll call.
No excuses
– “It’s in my car.” / “My mother’s bringing
it.” / “I was printing it in the
library.”
/ “It’s in my girlfriend’s truck which broke down and is in a
repair shop in Breaux Bridge,
Louisiana. Really! You can ask my
mother!” Any of these can be
true, but they are not excuses - you were
given this assignment two weeks
ago.
B. Introduce persuasive writing
Some miscellaneous notes:
A. That head may not be down and
those eyes may not be hidden in your
hands.
If you are that tired you should be home; if you are that sick you
should be in the nurse’s office.
B. If you cannot write a simple
declarative sentence you cannot succeed in this class. I hope and believe some of the curious
assemblies of words I read last week were due to carelessness.
Until you can demonstrate
control, avoid beginning sentences with verb phrases, i.e. “Walking into the
room, the wall on the right is painted green.” Walls do not walk into rooms;
indeed, they do not walk at all.
C. Demonstrate initiative –
while the old instructor is working with another student that is your time to
review your own work and that of others, not idle. A successful college student, like a
successful worker, does not need constant supervision. Passivity is your enemy.
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